Next time
I will take my
time
with you.
I was
too impatient.
Greedy
for you.
You are my
favorite flavor.
Rush to
swallow your
thoughts
before they are complete.
Devour
your gaze
where it falls
leaving famine
where it does not
reach.
Next time I’ll take my
time
since I can be very impatient
when it comes to
you.
But for now I will gorge.
i like the ending…caution against gorging though, might lead to an expulsion if taken in too fast.
Rushed to swallow his thoughts, means you took his breath away. You simply took his breath away…and that’s okay.
Or should be.
gorge….reminiscing
I
love
it.
So nice to dig in the crates and read the comments. Definitely makes me want to write more!